I cleared the entire monowire barrier before moving forward. Better to remove it, than risk blocking, or killing, someone that may try to escape through this area before it dissolved naturally. While I was clearing the way Skyl...
2024-10-20 15:27:03 +0000 UTC View PostI.. uh... don't know if I like this this chapter or not yet. It took a long time to put together, and it feels kinda... meh to me. It keeps the plot moving forward... I'll look it again later, and if I really don't like it I'll rewrit...
2024-10-18 03:04:50 +0000 UTC View PostI hadn’t really looked at Skyler’s gear until she stripped off her coat. What I originally thought was heavy armor was actually just lightly armored, rugged clothing, with an armored duster overtop; She also had an armored ...
2024-10-17 22:20:20 +0000 UTC View Post“The bear’s feet go tom tom tom, tom tom tom, tom tom tom, the bear’s feet got tom tom tom, as they go marching round!” Issi sang as she danced around the living room. Since I was fully reclined on the couch, and had no intentio...
2024-10-17 18:44:10 +0000 UTC View PostAs soon as we sat back down Skyler turned to me. “...
2024-10-17 16:07:40 +0000 UTC View PostI stared at my girlfriend for sever...
2024-10-14 21:54:55 +0000 UTC View PostWhen I stepped out of the processor, and back onto the street, things were a lot calmer than before. That probably had to do with the half dozen armored vehicles parked around the area and the practical army surrounding them. 2024-10-14 19:06:31 +0000 UTC View Post
“You okay over there?” Ratchet asked, as she crossed the room, carefully avoiding the bodies on the floor. “You seemed a little… out of there for a minute.” The woman reached out to put a hand on my shoulder, causing ...
2024-10-12 01:55:54 +0000 UTC View PostSo... I started thinking maybe I'd give the bears their personalities from well known games and media. As many have noticed Spooky is very much a WH40k comissioner. Bob is very much a lovable 80s sidekick. Can you guess who this is supposed to be?...
2024-10-11 23:20:41 +0000 UTC View PostThe gun on top of our ride opened up a good two minutes before we arrived at our destination. I could see Emily swerving back and forth in the gunner seat, struggling to keep track of all the targets.
When the ve...
2024-10-11 19:11:32 +0000 UTC View PostI slowly grabbed a piece of loose rebar leaning against the wall, without taking my eyes off the blurry indistinct shape. For some reason the person didn’t immediately try to rush me, or run, they just kinda slunk back further into the room. It ...
2024-10-11 17:18:31 +0000 UTC View PostBella POV
“Not going to help your friend?” I asked the lizard woman as I slid out of the wall. She was just casual...
2024-10-10 22:56:30 +0000 UTC View PostSo interesting tidbit... I had a pretty clear idea of where this arc was going, but I didn't have a clear idea of what kind of sabotage could cripple the corps in Calgary. I honestly considered having the answer be uranium mills, and the enemy goi...
2024-10-08 21:38:25 +0000 UTC View PostSo, after thinking about it, I'll probably be going back and rewriting chapter 8 and 9 later, to add a little more snark to Reina's dialog. She's far to passive compared to how I pictured her before, even though she's meeting a vetrean samurai. Wo...
2024-10-08 18:43:11 +0000 UTC View PostI didn’t know exactly what to say to Helen as she knelt in front of her friend, mourning. After a couple minutes she stood up, whipped her face off, and turned towards me. “We need to find out who did this,” she declared angrily.<...
2024-10-08 16:27:38 +0000 UTC View PostHowdy all!
So since there are a couple chapters of TBoB Book 3 out, I wanted to get peopes feedback on it so far.
As you may have guessed it's not planned to be an antithesis arc, but despite Helen being involved and someone being de...
2024-10-06 01:07:05 +0000 UTC View PostAbout ten minutes later a whole convoy of vehicles rolled up to the front of the Jewelry store. Two additional armored vehicles, a couple jeeps, and a half dozen trucks already laden with people. The civilians didn’t care, th...
2024-10-06 00:24:09 +0000 UTC View PostHmmm... Let me know what you think. I know where this arc is going, and I want to give Helen some room to grow, but I'm not 100% on this dirrection yet. It definitely makes some sense... but we'll see after a chapter or two more.<...
2024-10-05 20:59:08 +0000 UTC View PostI flew to sector Eighty-Two in my truck. I briefly considered taking a Kodiak, but unlike the northern sectors, the south did occasionally see truck traffic, so I decided to try and keep it low key. I had Nyx whip up a set of armored cl...
2024-10-05 15:39:05 +0000 UTC View PostI checked myself out in the mirror as soon as I put on my new synth leather jacket and pants. They both looked good, and were a lot more practical to run around in than my previous attire. More importantly they hid the under suit, which...
2024-10-02 23:09:08 +0000 UTC View PostI stumbled into the residence, fully intending to collapse on my couch, only to find it occupied.
“Squiddy, what are you doing here?” I asked, as I sunk into one of the cozy chairs next to her. “Didn’t I give you an entire...
2024-10-02 19:09:03 +0000 UTC View PostI gasped as the security gate exploded inward, disgorging a wave of antithesis upon the concourse, led by the Model Six.
“I don’t think I have the time for options, gimme something to clear the horde now!...
2024-10-02 16:16:28 +0000 UTC View PostSo over the last few days I've been considering what to do about my SCS fanfictions.
I didn't really want to release two different ones at once, but I do want to work on Tarnished a little, without dropping TBoB, so starting today I'm going ...
2024-10-02 13:25:35 +0000 UTC View PostThis took me sooooo long today, and it's kinda different than usual. At least I got it done on time this time :o
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“I wish the spectres weren’t required to participate in all matches,” I muttered as my sister strutted out...
2024-10-01 01:57:49 +0000 UTC View PostWhat I expected to be a short sprint down the street turned into an exercise of frustration as my legs occasionally spasmed, or failed to react the way I expected. Whether through determination and willpower, or sheer luck, I didn’t twitch while...
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