Okay, I rewrote a part in the middle. Cut out a particularly awkward conversation between Teddy and Nyx. It really didn't fit their relationship at all.
Unfortunately it made the chapter a little shorter than usual, but it also ...
2025-08-12 16:11:55 +0000 UTC
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“I almost had her! I demand a rematch!” Kass yelled through my tablet.
“You literally just finished fighting,” Bella giggled. “Maybe you should wait until we finish the match, before you demand a rematch.”
“I can...
2025-08-11 19:49:06 +0000 UTC
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Don't think I'm going to drag this out to a full combat arc. Now that we've seen Jennifer and Teddy bonding I'll probably try and wrap it up in the next chapter or two... Unless you think there's a reason to extend it.
2025-08-11 16:09:30 +0000 UTC
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“Now I don’t want to take up too much of your time today, it is your first day after all, but I did want to ask you something important,” Dr. Michaels said once everyone had calmed down. “Do you remember anything strange happening during t...
2025-08-09 00:17:45 +0000 UTC
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While Jennifer took up a position at the top of the stairs, behind the makeshift barrier, I stood off to the side watching the stairs through the thin metal railings.
“Do you even know how to use that?” I asked as Jennifer raised her tin...
2025-08-08 15:29:43 +0000 UTC
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Hey all,
Just wanted to let you know I've created new chat... channels? Threads? Whatever they are for my stories. I haven't used the until this point, but I thought I'd open a few topics to see if anyone would like to chat about the storie...
2025-08-07 21:10:07 +0000 UTC
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Not super happy wiht the last line, I feel like it should be something like that... but couldnt think of what to put!
Camille zipped around the room, sticking her nose into every closet and corner as I slowly sunk i...
2025-08-07 20:39:00 +0000 UTC
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I glanced up at the sky, trying to determine how fucked we actually were.
Most of the rifts appeared to have opened over the factories, and were dropping their seed pods in that general area. That was good, they weren’t close enough ...
2025-08-07 15:55:30 +0000 UTC
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Hmmmm... I wasn't a fan of this chapter at first. It felt like it was going to be a continuation of the panic attack of a few chapters ago, but I like where it went in the end.
As Pam reached out to knock, the door...
2025-08-07 01:01:23 +0000 UTC
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Not sure if I like the way this flows, will look at it again later.
Also, have a doctor's appointment later, so I can't guarentee the second chapter will get done today.
We took the time to unpack the wag...
2025-08-06 17:53:07 +0000 UTC
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Come on... you know that if anyone was going to stand up to Teddy is was going to be Kass
“STOP…” I screamed as another pillar of water rose out of the water and slammed down on me, washing me a meter or so a...
2025-08-05 19:41:01 +0000 UTC
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“You don’t know how to use a mesh rig?” Jennifer asked in disbelief. “Really?”
“I can get all the information I need from either the city networks, or through Nyx,” I grumbled. “Why would I want to use a total immersion syst...
2025-08-05 15:46:05 +0000 UTC
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I picked up the strange crystal tablet sitting on the table in the middle of the room and ran my finger across the front of it experimentally. Even though it appeared to just be a large slab of crystal, with no external hardware or power source, i...
2025-08-05 00:59:11 +0000 UTC
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Jennifer dragged me towards the back of the park. The crowds thinned out once we passed the main plaza, the facades slowly changed from the colorful cartoony versions we saw at the entrance to something more gritty and realistic.
We ended up...
2025-08-04 15:45:24 +0000 UTC
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This took me soooo long. I ended up rewriting large sections of it, and I'm still not super happy with it. Still better than it was. Hope you enjoy.
An entire squad of security guards showed up, each one armed with ...
2025-08-01 22:41:14 +0000 UTC
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Hey all!
Just wanted to let you know that RavensDaggers webstore now has stickers! I've been bothering the big birb for them for months, and as soon as they became available I bought a set.
Honestly, I just wanted to show them off. Loo...
2025-08-01 16:45:02 +0000 UTC
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“This is… a lot,” I muttered as I stood in front of the truck and waited for everyone to gather. Nimbleland was a riot of sights and sounds, flashing lights and screaming people.
And that was before we w...
2025-08-01 15:48:15 +0000 UTC
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I spent most of the day running around the refugee camp making sure that all my new citizens were settled properly.
Since I hadn’t planned for a kitchen ahead of time, I needed to find not only a cook, but someone that we could trust...
2025-07-31 19:01:33 +0000 UTC
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So I just wanted to ask, what does everyone think about TBoB book 5 so far? I was planning on making it a little more family based, but I've begun to worry that people will begin to lose interest with the lack of action. Even in the less combat in...
2025-07-31 17:01:49 +0000 UTC
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Sooo... I dunno where this came from. It's a lot of background and worldbuilding that I somehow hadn't covered in the story this far. Will it be relevant? I dunno. It just kind of flowed out of me, and came together really quickly. It ...
2025-07-31 15:51:30 +0000 UTC
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When we finally climbed to the top of the slope, and I got a look at the mass of humanity in front of me, a cold pit opened up in my stomach. I knew that my mother had planned on bringing as many people as she could, but as I looked out across the...
2025-07-30 19:58:51 +0000 UTC
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One down!
“You know how I said my situation was kind of complicated?” I said slowly, trying to ignore the fight at the other end of the hallway. Pam wandered over to the girl, and quickly checked on her conditio...
2025-07-30 15:48:06 +0000 UTC
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“I’m sorry! I let my temper get the best of me, and I didn’t even manage to take even a single one of them down,” Chelsea cried, her mane of auburn hair flopping about. “I was so confident too!”
“It’s alright, you did your b...
2025-07-29 18:24:30 +0000 UTC
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After lunch we spent a couple more hours at the seaside. This was not only the first time the rest of my family had seen the ocean in real life, but it was the first time they’d ever left the city.
I never really enjoyed going out in...
2025-07-29 15:43:22 +0000 UTC
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Woo! Finally done, several hours later than I have the last few weeks....
Since I know my free members couldn't read the previous message I'm repeating here. Feeling a little sick today, that's why thing...
2025-07-28 21:05:26 +0000 UTC
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Here it is!
So, I'm feeling a little sick today, but I'm going to try and get another chappy done this afternoon.
I haven't come up with a clear plan for the week, but i...
2025-07-28 16:55:19 +0000 UTC
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Not many changes to this one... I did realize that I missed chapter 56-65 of Tbob book 4 and added them, but all of this weeks chappies went into existing files
2025-07-25 19:47:51 +0000 UTC
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We spent another hour or so at the aquatic garden, following the colorful holograms around the complex. A part of me still didn’t believe that there used to be such a variety and abundance of sea life in the oceans, I was so used to the world wh...
2025-07-25 19:32:44 +0000 UTC
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“Is this what a greenhouse is supposed to look like?” I asked suspiciously as I wandered out of the rest room.
“A complete one to one replication of a jungle? Well, at least the Jungles before the Antithesis got to them,” Deadbeat re...
2025-07-25 15:46:28 +0000 UTC
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Surprise! I did another chappy today. Bonus!
I stared at the gate for several long seconds, half expecting it to flare back to life any second and an army of gilded knights to come storming through. As soon as I wa...
2025-07-24 22:07:18 +0000 UTC
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