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Inquisition honestly worked really well with each other. I hadn’t even said anything about their composition, but it was pretty cle...
2022-10-30 18:35:32 +0000 UTC View PostPlease leave feedback!
“Alice, Nora, Alex, Jonathan,” the [Fire Mage] said, pointing to the [Druid of Dreams], [Alchemist], [Zen Archer], and himself in turn. “Our party name Inquisition.”
That was certainly on...
2022-10-29 17:23:24 +0000 UTC View PostPlease leave feedback! Even if I don't respond, I read all of it!
“We can take a break now,” I said, patting the sweat-soaked Guild representative on the back.
He’d been worn down by the half-clear. Karl was a le...
2022-10-28 16:42:16 +0000 UTC View PostLet me know your thoughts. Is this a satisfying end to the first arc?
I blinked awake, forcing myself to get off the ground. How long had it been? I’d stayed half-conscious through the usage of my dungeon half, but I’d j...
2022-10-27 03:38:25 +0000 UTC View PostLet me know your thoughts on this one, please. Thanks!
Five minutes to kill them. Make it four and a half to be safe.
My hatred tore through me, but I kept it in check. Pragmatism was good. Blind rage wasn’t...
2022-10-25 16:11:30 +0000 UTC View PostPlease like the post if you're enjoying the chapters! Also, let me know if anything feels weird/off for you. I do edit before RR.
After the initial offense, there were ten of them left, and we numbered thirteen. Going off of...
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I gasped awake.
The tunnel where I’d died was gone. The wall between the safe room and the first room was nearly completely go...
2022-10-23 20:43:14 +0000 UTC View PostPlease leave feedback below! I do edit, and reader feedback is critical!
Edited 10/22: Slightly changed some details of the ending.
This was it. No more training, no more last minute additions.
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2022-10-22 05:39:42 +0000 UTC View PostPlease leave feedback! Let me know if the kind of montage-y chapter worked for you!
The training sessions were starting to blend together now. After Anderson had left, I’d successfully [Assimilate]d the [Devouring Ooze], a...
2022-10-21 06:25:41 +0000 UTC View PostThis one fought me. Please leave feedback if you've got any! I appreciate you for reading.
“I’m glad we were able to get that resolved without too many issues,” I said, dusting myself off. “Well.”
Troy pulled...
2022-10-20 03:54:35 +0000 UTC View PostPlease give feedback. I'm tired. Pumping these out in one day is hard.
“Sorry, what?” the [Tactician] asked. “I believe I may have misheard you.”
“I need monsters,” I said. “The dungeon needs monsters.”...
2022-10-19 05:18:55 +0000 UTC View PostHands on fire today. Let me know if you spot anything that needs fixing!
The Duelists of the Weave recovered before Minus One did. That made sense, in some way—M-1 had fewer members, so they had to expend more mana per per...
2022-10-17 18:57:34 +0000 UTC View PostAnother long one. We hit the big 50! Let me know your feedback in the comments.
The level 2 squad—the Duelists of the Weave, apparently—were looking a lot better now than they had before, but there were still so many obv...
2022-10-17 16:35:49 +0000 UTC View PostI’d spent an entire night musing over how I could make this dungeon more effective for training adventurers. I’d planned, prepped, and modified monsters. One half of the dungeon was almost unrecognizable when compared to the five-room design I...
2022-10-17 03:21:23 +0000 UTC View Post“Just to be clear,” I said, flattening the ground under the spot where Minus One had set the sofa down, “this is the same artifact you stole from the Kingsguard, right? Also, why the sofa?”
“It is,” Rose said, flopping down onto ...
2022-10-16 06:09:49 +0000 UTC View PostOof, this one got really long. Enjoy and leave feedback!
“Do you have everything?” Rose asked, practically bouncing with excitement.
“Troy has his stick,” Ryan said, rolling his eyes and smiling. “I didn’t ...
2022-10-15 07:43:19 +0000 UTC View PostI had to swap up how I did things around here. That much was immediately obvious.
So far, I’d been fair. I’d explained traps to people, told them what monsters did, and generally just handheld them through the entire dungeon. Yes, I’d ...
2022-10-13 18:20:50 +0000 UTC View PostLeave feedback in the comments below!
Getting hit by an explosion was never fun, though it was a little more common than one might expect. During my brief time as an adventurer and my ongoing stint as a dungeon, I’d suffer...
2022-10-12 04:02:25 +0000 UTC View PostThe COVID booster hit me kind of hard. Please leave feedback :) I'm doing my best.
The [Analyst] was a severe-looking man, probably in his late 50s but with a body structure that suggested he was a decade or two younger.
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“W—wait, wait, hold on,” I said, stumbling over my own words in my haste. “Kill him?”
“Of course,” Jackson said, preparing his shield onc...
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I was already manipulating the earth around us as the Kingsguard dashed in. Without the massive numbers advantage that I’d maintained against the [Astral Monk], just del...
2022-10-09 17:12:41 +0000 UTC View Post“Enemy!” I shouted.
The two security guards Iris had brought were already reacting. Jackson’s shield, already planted in the ground, started to glow with mana as the man finished activating his [Force Shield]. As I watched, a thin barr...
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“Hey,” I greeted them. “That was fast.”
“I work fast,” Iris said, a hint of a boast in her voice. “Will this be satisfactory?”
“O...
2022-10-07 06:44:16 +0000 UTC View PostFirst things first. I didn’t want to accidentally use a strong new skill in a place where it could lay waste to me and my best-laid plans, so I opened up some space in a wall, giving me about a ten by ten by ten cube of room to work with.
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2022-10-06 06:07:10 +0000 UTC View Post“The hells?” the [Swashbuckler] asked. “We cleared the room.”
He was a good-looking guy, I had to admit, and that might’ve changed the direction of this conversation with other people, but I was irritated enough to not care. I had ...
2022-10-05 05:48:05 +0000 UTC View Post“Hey, Iris,” I greeted the Alder Corporation’s… CEO? President? I didn’t actually know what the equivalent here was. “I have a lot of questions.”
“I’m sure you do,” she said. Iris turned to the adventuring party, addressi...
2022-10-03 06:30:55 +0000 UTC View PostRemember to comment on things that seem out of place. I do edit before RR.
I had at least one new spell slot. The [Assimilate] hadn’t actually taken the [Spawn Monster] spell slot, so I had that to use as I saw fit, but it...
2022-09-30 18:58:45 +0000 UTC View PostRemember: see anything weird? Something that you don't like? Comment down below. I do edits before going to RR.
EDITED 9/30: Clarified the punishment for Anderson.
With the death of the boss came...
2022-09-29 04:51:02 +0000 UTC View PostRemember, if you see something that you think is weird, let me know. I do edit these based on feedback prior to final publication.
As it turned out, waking the [Fake Hydra] wasn’t going to be a problem, because it was alre...
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